Dhiyan Jamman Ton Lok Kyon Darde Han...?
Aap biti sachi kahani...Kamal jhat dene boli:- daddy tusi nashe di gal karde hon PG wale uncle ta sanu chah ni peen dinde..kehnde ehde vich nasha hunda...Hun mainu Kamal diyan gallan te thoda thoda shak hon lag pya c...Kehnde aa k kayi wari jyada hoshiyari v maar jandi aa...Ainiya gallan bataan karke asin PG chon bahar aa gye.
Asin jado PG chon bahar aa rahe c tan ik 50 ku saal d pendu bibi v sade nal hi budbud kardi bahar nikli...Main usdi gal sunan di koshish kiti.
Oh keh rahi c:- aag lagna ki jamana aa gya..school wale fees lainde ta sune c par paise dinde aj pahili war sune aa.
Main puchheya:- Mata keehdi gal kar rahe o..? kaun paise dinda..?
Mata kehndi:- Ve kahda bhai...meri potri rehdi aa ethe te main aaj milan ayi c ohnu, te mere hath te aah 10.000 rupaiya rakhta kehndi Beeji eh menu school chon mile aa. Je main pucheya kude tenu kahde mile aa ..? Tan kehndi :- mainu naukri milgii. Bhai menu ta samj ni aundi..aje 10 v class ch parhdi aa..khaure kehde bhaduye ne ehnu naukri v de diti..? Main us mata ton usda address te osdi potri da mobile number lai leya te asin sochan de smundraan ch tairde hoeyan ne ludhiane wal nu chaale pa dite.
Asin 3-4 dina baad apne dost di facebook ID ton Kamal nu request bheji te usne request accept kar lyi.Te us nal
chating da silsla shuru ho gya....Chatng vich Kamal ne apna naam Manmeet
dseya..te kehndi k main Jalandhar air-hostess da course kar rahi aa.te jayada detail vich puchhan te oh gal gol-mol karke taal gyi. Par ik gal eh v note karn wali c us naal jado v gal hundi c oh aksar free mildi c.
Kareeb 8-10 dina vich hi oh mere friend nu milan waste v raji ho gyi. Te usne sharat rakhi k oh Chandigarh hi milege. te usne v sanu ohi mobile number dita jo usdi friend ne dita c...! Te Kamal ne ohi gal kahi k tusi es number te night 10 to 7 am tak gal kar sakde hon, Kyonki din vich eh number band rehnda h...
Te thode dina vich hi Kamal di mere friend naal close friendship ho gyi. Te hun oh sari sari raat us nal gallan kardi rehndi c.
Te aksar oh webcam te hi chat v karde c. Jado raat nu oh gal kardi c ta osda gharwala mobile number band rehda c. Te is samay dauraan oh mere friend nu 1-2 war mil v chukki c. Te main ehna dina vich apne dost jani ke Kamal de dad kol kayi war Chandigarh diyan kudiyan bare gal chhed chukeya c par har war ehi keh k gal muka dinda c k "yar sab kudiyan iko jahiyan nahi hundiya....oh bde maan nal kehnda...hun tu apni Kamal hi dekh la...koi kiven galat keh du esnu..yar kuj mapeya de sanskaar v hunde ne bacheyan vich.....even koi bacha chheti kite galat ni hunda."
Main dil hi dil vich sochda rehnda c k mere bholeya yaara tu ki jane teri suche moti jahi dhee tere sanskara da ki mul tardi firdi aa.
Kareeb 8-10 dina vich hi oh mere friend nu milan waste v raji ho gyi. Te usne sharat rakhi k oh Chandigarh hi milege. te usne v sanu ohi mobile number dita jo usdi friend ne dita c...! Te Kamal ne ohi gal kahi k tusi es number te night 10 to 7 am tak gal kar sakde hon, Kyonki din vich eh number band rehnda h...
Te thode dina vich hi Kamal di mere friend naal close friendship ho gyi. Te hun oh sari sari raat us nal gallan kardi rehndi c.
Te aksar oh webcam te hi chat v karde c. Jado raat nu oh gal kardi c ta osda gharwala mobile number band rehda c. Te is samay dauraan oh mere friend nu 1-2 war mil v chukki c. Te main ehna dina vich apne dost jani ke Kamal de dad kol kayi war Chandigarh diyan kudiyan bare gal chhed chukeya c par har war ehi keh k gal muka dinda c k "yar sab kudiyan iko jahiyan nahi hundiya....oh bde maan nal kehnda...hun tu apni Kamal hi dekh la...koi kiven galat keh du esnu..yar kuj mapeya de sanskaar v hunde ne bacheyan vich.....even koi bacha chheti kite galat ni hunda."
Main dil hi dil vich sochda rehnda c k mere bholeya yaara tu ki jane teri suche moti jahi dhee tere sanskara da ki mul tardi firdi aa.
Eh sab kuj main Kamal di sachai janan vaste kar
reha c, ke jo main sun reha eh sach h ja aiven Kamal nu badnam karn
vaste hi us kudi te gate-kipper ne keh dita.
Te duje pase main apne dost da Kamal nu milna te us nal phone te gal karni band karva diti..."main socheya k yar Kamal nu phone tan main karvaya c apne friend ton...Kamal ne ta pahel nahi kiti. Te ho sakda h Kamal mere friend naal sacha pyar karn lag pyi hove..te meri ik galatfehmi karke Kamal di zindgi nark ban jave. Mera dil bar bar eh keh reha c k Kamal aisi nai ho sakdi."
Es karke main dubara us kudi nu milan da mann bnaya jis ne Kamal da private number te usdi facebook ID diti c..Main usnu apne dost nal pyar karn di shanka jahar kiti..te oh haske kehndi. "kehde chakran ch pai gye o uncle g tusin..? Kamal bahut agge ja chuki h..usdi sachai janana koi muskil kam nahi...jidan tuhada dil kre usdin hi usnu range hathin pakad sakde hom."
Par main ik waar hor dekhna chahunda c...main apne ik bahut close friend nu eh kahani daske Kamal de private phone number di call detail te usdi fake ID di inquiry kadvaun da kam shuru kar dita te duje pase main apne dost (Kamal de daddy) nal vdha sara jigra karke usnu es sab kuj dasan da mood v bna chukeya c..kyonki aina sab kuj apne dil vich sambhal k rakhana mere layi aukha ho reha c..te nal nal main us mata d ladki jisne 10000 dita c jo sanu PG de gate ton bahar mili c usdi sachai janan d muhim v shuru karva diti c.
Te duje pase main apne dost da Kamal nu milna te us nal phone te gal karni band karva diti..."main socheya k yar Kamal nu phone tan main karvaya c apne friend ton...Kamal ne ta pahel nahi kiti. Te ho sakda h Kamal mere friend naal sacha pyar karn lag pyi hove..te meri ik galatfehmi karke Kamal di zindgi nark ban jave. Mera dil bar bar eh keh reha c k Kamal aisi nai ho sakdi."
Es karke main dubara us kudi nu milan da mann bnaya jis ne Kamal da private number te usdi facebook ID diti c..Main usnu apne dost nal pyar karn di shanka jahar kiti..te oh haske kehndi. "kehde chakran ch pai gye o uncle g tusin..? Kamal bahut agge ja chuki h..usdi sachai janana koi muskil kam nahi...jidan tuhada dil kre usdin hi usnu range hathin pakad sakde hom."
Par main ik waar hor dekhna chahunda c...main apne ik bahut close friend nu eh kahani daske Kamal de private phone number di call detail te usdi fake ID di inquiry kadvaun da kam shuru kar dita te duje pase main apne dost (Kamal de daddy) nal vdha sara jigra karke usnu es sab kuj dasan da mood v bna chukeya c..kyonki aina sab kuj apne dil vich sambhal k rakhana mere layi aukha ho reha c..te nal nal main us mata d ladki jisne 10000 dita c jo sanu PG de gate ton bahar mili c usdi sachai janan d muhim v shuru karva diti c.
Kamal de phone di call detail ton pta lga k usnu har roj
naven numbra ton callan aa rahiyan c. Jina vich 2 number eho jahe c jina te
rojana kafi kafi der gal ho rahi c..te oh 2 mundeya de number c. Jad main ohna numbran te gal kiti tan pta lageya k oh doven Manmeet (Kamal) nu apni lover samjhde c. Te jad asin ohna dohwan nu wakho-wakh puchheya k ki tusin Kamal naal marriage karvaunge
tan ohna dovan ne iko hi gal kahi k Manmeet chahegi ta jarur kravange.
Te
ohna dovan nu hi Manmeet ne apna address te job alag alag dasi hoyi
c....te ohna de dassan mutabik oh Manmeet nu daily wang milde c par
timing dovan d vakho vakhri c...jdo ik nu puchheya k Manmeet de shouk ki
ne oh kenda "long drive te jana jo oh aksar shimla ja mansuri jana
pasand kardi c....duje nu puchheya te ohda kehna c k oh shoping d bahut
shaukin c mehnge kapde paune te vdhiya restorenta te hotelan ch lunch
dinner karne di shaukin h." Main puchheya kde ghuman firan bare ni kehndi ta
usda jawab c k "ohnu ta nahi kehndi c par jadon main kehnda c, te oh
aksar tal dindi c." te usne dasseya k oh ek laptop v gift lai chuki h
uston. Jiste Kamal apni fake id ton us naal gal kardi. eh sab oh sanu nahi, apne frnd nu das reha c jo sanu apne mobile da speaker on karke suna reha
c.
Main Kamal de dady nu bahane nal chadigarh
bulaya... te usnu keha k yar ik kudi aa apni Kamal de PG ch hi rehndi
aa jisde mape v jyada amir nahi han..par oh galat sangat vich pai gyi
h..te usnu os cho kadna h kiven kdiye..........oh kehnda es ki problam h
...pta kro oh es kam vich pyi kyon....m keha bas shauk nal hi...kehn
da
nyi yar usdi koi na koi majburi hovegi...even koun bure kama ch
painda.?..m keha nyi yar sara pta kar lya usdi koi majburi nai...bas
apne shouk pure karan vaste te life injoy karn vaste hi oh eh kam kar
rahi aa...oh kehnda fer ta galat gall aa ohde vaste.....m keha yar menu
ta hun apni kamal bare dar lagan lag pyaa...k kite oh vi na madiyan
kudyan nal reh k vigad jave....oh jhat bol pya..nahi nahi sangdil meri
dhee aisa kde v nai kar sakdi....es tra glaan kardya 2 raat ho gyi te
asin khana kha k sou gye...par m aje tak kise manjil te pahunchda najar
nai aa reha c....din chadeya asin kamal de p.g pahuch gye...te ja k cha
pani p k asin kamal nu ik side te karke oston bahane nal puchheya... byi
teri kise munde nal frnd ship vgaira h ta dasde ja tu kise munde nu
pyar kardi a ta....ta v dsde sanu koi aitraj nahi par...dekhi kite koi
aisa kadam na chak lyi jis nal asin smaj vich mooh dikhaun joge na
rahiye...ta oh ron lag pyi...kehdi uncle g tuc soch kiven lya k main es
tra kar sakdi aa....ki tuhanu m aisi kudi lagdi aan.?...m ta aisi kudi
de kol baithdi tak nahi.......kamal diyan glaan sun k usda dady bde maan
nal kehnda...dekheya sangdil m tenu keha c na k meri dhii aisi nahi
aa..tu ta aivi dri janda.c..m mann hi mann soch reha c k kaaash aisa hi
hove.......sadi kamal aisi na hi hove.
Mainu 2 dina baad usde ghumaun firaun wale frnd
ne dseya k oh mere nal shimle aayi hoi h...m fon krk puchhya ta
kehndi..uncl m apni saheli de ghar ayi hoi haan..m usde frnd da
no.milake keha k plz usnu dsin na kis da fon a bs ohde kann nal lahde.
Usde kann nal launde saar m keha..kamal m tera
uncle bolda...m teri es saheli kol tere dady nu nal laike aa reha...eh
sun k oh meriyan minta kadan lag pyi...kaindi plz uncle dady nu na dseo
es bare...eh munda menu blackmel kar reha main ta krk es nal ayi
aa...baki gal m aake dsungi par plz plz mere aun tak dady nu na dseo...m
keha chal thik aa par menu pta c k kamal eh sab drama apne aap nu
bachaun waste kar rahi aa.
Dusre din kamal ne chd. aa k menu p.g.
bulaya.,jad m usnu keha k j tenu oh blackmel kar reha ta aapa thane ch
report likha dine aa..jad police da kutapa chadeya ta...oh ta ki ohde
friste v darnge aisa kam krn ton...police d gal sun k oh ghabra gyi.
Kamal kehndi nahi nahi uncle police nu na
daseo ehven gal vadh jaugii te dady d badnami hovegi...m dil vich keha
agge bde tu dady de madle puayi jani aa.. m fir keha..dekh kamal j aapan
police nu inform na kita ta esda hounsla vadh jauga te kal nu esnu vekh
k koi hor tenu blackmel karan lag jauga..kendi nahi nahi uncle hun koi
nai kruga.....m kamal nu payar nal baitha k keha...dekh kamal menu
sacho sach dasde k asal ch kahani ki h..aje dulle beraan da kuj ni
vigdya...par j gal tere dady kol puj gyi ta gadbad ho hojugi..oh ron lag
pyii te rondi rondi kehndi uncle m us munde nu pyar krdi aa..m keha
pyar krdi krk uste blackmel da ilzam lga rahi c..kehndi nahi uncle m
tuhade ton dar bahut gyi c ta krk jhooth boleya gya..m keha dekh kamal j
tusin real ch ik duje nu pyar krde o tuhadi marriag karvauni meri
jimmevari aa par j hor gal nikli ta maitho bura koi nahi..oh kehndi nahi
uncle asin real vich ik duje nu bahut pyar krde haan...m keha chalo
theek aa fer hun m aape jagge nal gal kar launga....kamal de dady da nam
joga singh c par asin sare usnu jagga kehke bulaunde c...m ehna kehke
pind aa gya...menu aye nu 3..4 din hi hoye hon ge k jagge da fon aya te
usne menu ghar bulaya... m socheya jrur usnu kamal wali gal da pta lga
houga te menu kamal nu samjaun vaste bulaya hovega...m shaam nu ohde
ghar gya..ta menu jagge de chehre ton lgaa k jiven oh bahut gusse vich
hove..usdi ik vjah hor v c..kyonki oh jdo v menu milda c jaffi pake
milda c par aj usne baithe baithe ne chair te baithan da ishara kar dita
c..te oh bina haal chaal puchhe hi boliya..yar sangdil tu meri kamal de
pichhe hath dho k kyon pyan hoya...osne ki vigadya tera....ohdi ehni
gal sun k menu samjde der na lgi k kamal ne esnu mere virudh bhadka dita
h... par m shant jahe mood vich puchheya...pahilan ta eh das k kamal
tere ikkalle d dhee kdo ton ban gyi..te eh sade vich teri meri kdo ton
aun lag pyi...oh kuj na boleya..m fer puchheya das menu,jawab de meri
gal da.
Ehni der nu jagge d wife sade kol aa gyi te
menu kehndi veer g gusa na kreo ehna nu kamal ne keha k m saheli de ghar
gyi c te uncle kehnde aa k tu kise munde nu milan gyi c..tuhanu pta e
aa apni dhi bare koi baap kuj v nai sun na pasand krda.
Main keha sorry bhabi g maitho galti hogi m ta
kamal nu apni beti samj k osda khyal rakh reha c k kite oh v dusriyan
kudiyan wang rasta na bhatak jave..par j tuhanu eh changa nai lagda ta m
hath jodke mafi mangdaan ha t vayda karda ha k aj ton baad tuhanu te
kamal nu shikayat da mauka nahi devanga...par ik jagge nu promis karna pavega,
k oh meri es gal nu dil te na lave te apni yari vich fark na pain
deve..mere nal pahilan wangu rahe,mere ik bol te bhajeya aave jiven
main auna huna..jagge ne uth k menu jaffi pa layi te ron lag pya te
kenhda yara m kamal de,mere jigar de tukde de moh vich aina dub chukeya
haan k us bare koi gal sun ni sakda..par j tenu lagda k kamal wakya hi
galat ja rahi te ja oh jhooth bol rahi h.. taan tenu aj ton mere wlon
ful power h tu usda baap ban k nigrani rakh sakda h..m puchheya..pakki
gal aa? jagga kehnda pakki...m fir keha sochla..oh kenhda..soch lya..m
jor nal hass k keha...na oh bhrawa...pahila e hath lag ge aa menu...te
ehna kehke m ohna ton alwida lai k ghar aa gya..
Es tran pure 3
mahine guzar gye...m mudke kde kamal bare koi gal na kiti jagge nal..par
thodi bahuti kamal diyan gativithdiyan te nazar jrur rakh reha c....te
ik din rab ne ik hor khed rach diti......mere ik dost da fon aya k kal
nu bete d birthday parti h te tusin jrur auna...m meri adat mutabik
osnu uprle j mno ja eh keh lyo k usda maan rakhan waste usnu haan keh
diti k koi gal nahi jrur aavange..par agle din bhul gya...te shaam jehi
nu ohda fon fer aa gya..te m kudartan os hotel de kol c..m jhatt dene
gaddi ghumai te parti ch shamil hon lyi hotel de andar jyon hi dakhal
hoya taan.
Menu kamal da fon aa gya...oh ghabrai hoi lag
rahi c.,menu kehndi uncle g m kise problam ch fas gyi aan plz menu
bachalo...sun k v ghabra gya..m keha ki gal hogi kamal..? Oh kehndi m
thane vich haan uncle g plz jaldi aa jao menu bahut dar lag reha.
M ftafat bina dse e jagge nu nal lya te asin
krib 1.30 hour ch chd. thane pahunch gye.ja k pta lageya k kamal ne
skoda gddi kise ch thok diti c jo oh sanu apni saheli de brother d das
rahi c te munshi de dasan mutabik kamal ne driving sme drink kiti hoi c.
Eh sab dekh k jagga kuj na bolya,menu hi sab
kuj nabedan da ishara krk thane cho bahar chala gya..main s.h.o nu duji
party nal rajinawa karn bare keh k jagge nu haunsla den lyi bahr aya
taan menu bahr jagga kite nazar na aya.
Main thoda edar odar dekhya ta Jagga menu gddi ch
baitha miliya...oh ro reha c...menu kehnda yar main es kudi nu ki
bnauna chaunda c te eh ki ban gyi...m keha koi nai yar oh aje niyani aa,
galti ta kise to v ho sakdi h insan galtiyan da putla h..koi ni aapa
ohnu pyar nal samjavange ta oh sab chhad dugi.m jagge nu haunsla de k
thane lai aanda te asin duji party nal raula 25000 ch nabed k gaddi ate
kamal nu nal laike p.g. ch aa gye.othe aake sanu pta lageya k oh gddi v
kamal de kise frnd d c...jo sanu p.g. de bahar khada ohdi wait karda
mileya c...par kamal kol jagge de sare swala da ron ton siva hor koi
jawab nai c.
kafi der chup rehn baad jagga menu
kainda..kamal nu keh ghar jan lyi sman pack kre..kamal d roomate
boli..vir g esnu ethon ljake esdi prhai kyon kharab krde o, m esnu
samjaungi eh dubara aisi galti nai krdi.mere ton reha na gya, main keha haan haan tu jrur esnu samjayegi..jedi aap
nasha karke p.g ch talli hoke suti rehndi hove oh jrur samja sakdi h
kise nu...meri gal da osnu koi jawab na sujheya...m keha..chal kamal
chak apna saman te chal sade nal...oh ro ro k tarle kadan lag pyi..m
keha dekh kamal m tenu pahilan hi keha c k tu sambhal
ja par tu meri gal tich karke jani...hun eh magarmachhi athru vahaun da
koi fayda nai...chup krk saman pack kar te gaddi ch rakh...sada eh
raula painda sun k p.g wala malik v aa gya... te gusse vich usdi
khatidari v changi kar diti te usdiyan sariyan kartutan bare janu karva
dita..m usnu keha k j teri kudi raat nu tenu kahe k dady m swere aa
jaungi..ki tu usnu v ehi kahenga k koi gal nahi beti 200 rupaiya de de
te ja jithe marji aish kar...te oston baad asin kamal nu nal laike ldh
wal nu chale pa ditte.....
jad samrale vich d langh rahe c ta menu
achanak oh budi mayi dikh gyi jisdi potri ose p.g ch renhdi c...m us kol
ja k gaddi rok diti..jagga kehnda eh koun aa..m keha ik mint main tenu v
milauna es bibi nu..m gaddi rok k os nu sat shri akal bulai ta menu
thoda jeha pehchan k j kehndi put tu ohi jo menu meri potri de hostel ch
mileya c..m keha hanji b.g. mian ohi aa...hor suna ki haal aa
tuhada...kiven chaldi aa tuhadi potri d parhai...ta oh boli ve kahdi ve
put oh ta hun sukh nal delhi padan lag pyi...nale ohnu othe naukri mil
gyi....sadi ta changi rab ne sun lyi...nale 30,40 hjar rupaiya kama
laindi aa nale parhai kari jandi...mere usdi os din wali sari reel akhan
aggeon ghum gyi...te asin usdi potri da nva no. laike te mata nu fateh
bula k gadi ch baith k chal pye.
Usdin ton baad jagge k ghar kamal nu laike roj
da kalesh rehn lag pya te es tention vich jagge ne drink krni shuru kar
diti..ohdi drink nu laike jagge d misg ne menu kyi war keha k vir g
ehna nu samjao pr m jdo v koshish kiti, jagge da iko hi jwab jagge da iko hi jwab hunda c...yar m ki kran
menu meri dhee ne dob k rakh ditta.. m ki socheya c k meri dhi kalpna
chawla..kiran bedi wargi bnu te mera nam roshan kru par ohne ta menu
mitti vich mila dita...m ki kraan...m keha yar aidi gal hai nahi jiddi
tu bnake beh gya...theek a usne galti kiti aa par es da eh matlab
ta nahi k tu usnu samjaun te usda fikar karan d bjaye daru peen lag
javen..nale jo usne gunah kita h es vich usda ghat te p.g. d marhi
sangat da jyada ksur h...apne shareer da koi ang kharab ho jave usnu
bina ilaz karvaye katt k sutt ta nahi deyida...plz siyana ban te aapa
sochde aan k kiven kamal da future kharab hon ton bachaya jave...mere
kyi dina tak tok tokayi karan te oh daru peeno ta hatt gya par gumsum
jeha rehn lag pya...dusri side kamal rojana apni mummy te jor pa rahi c k
tu dady nu keh k menu es war maf kar dio m mud k aisi galti nahi
kardi...plz menu meri parhai puri kar lain deo..ma akhir ma hundi aa oh
apne aap te har ik dukh, julm musibat sahar sakdi aa par apne bache de
akh vich athru nahi dekh sakdi.. akhir mamta de wehna vich veh gyi te
mera nam lai dita k j tera sangdil uncle kahe ta tere dady mann sakde
ne...ehne kehn d der c kamal de menu fon aone shuru ho gye.....meri
condition chakki de 2 purhaan de vich fasse hoye wargi ho chukki
c...kyonki j main jagge kol usdi gal chhed da c ta oh kamal da nam tak
nahi lain dinda c..parhan d gal ta door rahi....te dusri side kamal
diyan adtaan bare v main changi traan janu c.
akhir mahine ded mahine vich kamal ne parhai
regular rakhan lyi sare raji kar lye....par jagge ne ik sharat rakh diti
k hun chandigarh nahi..ludhiane parhna pau...te eh shart kamal ne haske
parvaan kar lyi...m rab da shukar kita k chalo sab kuj theek ho
gya...hun chal kamal apne mapeyan d nigrani heth ta rahugi...te ghron college
updown karan nal kise galat society ton v bachi rahugi....eh sab kuj
hon ton baad main apne aap nu bda halka jeha mehsoos kar reha c...! but
ik chinta menu lagatar sta rahi c,oh eh k kamal hnere swere apne frnds
nal facebook te,te apne personal no.ton lgatar contect vich c te oh
daily ohna sareya nal gllan kar rahi c,te same time sari sari raat busy
rehndi c...eh sab main ohde numbraan d detail check kar k pta lga reha
c...te eh sab gatividhiyan es gal da ishara kar rahiyan san k kamal
mithiyan marke apne family nu bharma k ik na ik koi putha sitha kara
jrur karugi....!par mere kol te os d family de kol siva usdi gal manan
to es da hor koi chara nahi c...! te karib 3 mahine sukh shanti nal
guzar gye..jagga v hun khush c, kamal de badal jan te...te nal nal oh
kamal vaste munda v tlash kar reha c,k kamal dubara koi aisi vaisi
harkat kre uston pahilan es de hath peele kar k apne siron bhar
utaraan,,,,,,,par rab nu kuj hor manjoor c.
swere scooty laike nikalna tuition
padna,college jana,engilsh coching classan lagvauniya,vagaira vagaira te
shaam nu 4,5 vje vapis auna, eh kamal da daily da rutteen c...ik din
daily wang kamal ghron 9 vje eh keh k niklee k mummy aj meri fnd da
birthday h te main shaam nu late ghar aungi.
main kamal de dusre private no. d call detail
ton oh numbr lye jis te oh call kar rahi c te sun rahi c,,,,,te jad
menu pura pta lag gya k oh kithe h ta main jagge nu fon krk apne kol
bula lya .....kyonki hun main kamal nu koi v mauka nahi dena chaunda c
jo oh jagge sahmne mainu jhootha karke aap safe nikal jave...jagga menu
kehnda
ki program h.? kidhar jana jo aini jaldi kar reha ..m keha kam hi koi
aisa h tu thaoda jaldi pahunch mere kol j der ho gyi ta bahut der ho
javegee....oh kreeb adhe ghante vich mere kol pahunch gya te asin kariib
night 8 vje apne target,mission te pahunch gye...ik ludhiane da
mashhoor hotel, te hotel vich room no. 308 da jdo asin gate khadkaya ta
andro ik ladies awaj ayi...kaun,,,,,,,,main keha...waiter mam...! te jad
usne gate kholeya ta sahmne da seen dekh k jagge nu gusse vich attack
hon wala ho gya par m te ik mere nal hor dost ne ftafat jagge nu
sambhaleya....!andar kamal ik munde nal bahut ghat kapdya vich c...te
sanu dekh k oh munda bhajjan lga par asin us nu pakad k bitha lya te
kamal bathroom vich varh gyi.
kenhde jo rab karda chnga hi karda..jisnu
bachauna ohve us d vidh parmatma aap banauda h...m kudartan os din kamal
k ghar gya te gllan gllan ch gal chal pyi te jagge d misg ne dseya k
kamal aj eh kehke gyi aa k ajj osdi frnd da birthday h te oh aj late
ghar augi....mera ose wakt matha thankeya...kyonki menu usdi fon detail
dekh k eh shak c k kamal koi na koi aisi
waisi harkat jroor krungi.....so m ftafat apne frnd nu kehke os din d
call detail lyi..te usda pta laun d koshish kiti k aj os da ki program
c...te kyi fon karan te eh pta lageya k os din usdi kise v frnd da
birthdya nahi c te mera shak yakiin vich badalan lga te jdo main kamal
nu call kiti te usne mera fon pahilaan kattna shuru kar dita. te 5,7
mint baad no reply aon lga..te adhe ghante baad switch off aun lag
gya...m jagge nu fon karke puchheya k koi kamal da fon ta nahi aaya
tuhanu ? te jagge nu apni misg nu puchheya ta oh kehndi aya c te kamal
keh rahi c k mummy mere fon d battry low ho rahi aa j fon band ho gya
ta tention nahi laini m aapne aap call kar laungi....hun kamal d sari
plan meriyan akhaan moohar di lang gyi but main hairan ho reha c kamal
de aine sharp mind te...te soch reha k.....aisi dhee de jamman te banda
rove na ta hor ki kre.
Sade pushan te kamal pahilan wang fer ron da
drama krn lagi tan jagge ne usnu walaan tön fad lya te sade rokdyan 2
usne 5,7 kamal de thapd jarh dite...asin bdi muskil nal jagge nu shaant
kita..te fer oh aurtan wang wain pa k ron lag pya.
Sade priwar vich koi dhi nai c, mere 2 bete c,
meri rijh c k rab ik dhi deve ta m v dhi da daan d k aapna nam daniyan
vich likhawaun joga hojan..par aj jagge d halat dekh k soch reha c k
aisi dhi ton ta admi be-aulada hi changa.
jagge d halt dekh k menu aj pta lga k akhir
kyo lok dhiyan jamman ton darde han.!koi kini ku rakhi kar lu dhiyan d,
menu ehvi ni lgda k 1 amritdhari ma te har gal waheguru te chhadan wale
devtyan jahe peo de sanskar bure hon ge.
Kafi jhidkaan kha k, ro dho k, kamal boli...eh
mera dost jasmit h..te asin ik duje nu pyar krde haan te bahut din hoge
c asin mile nahi c ta krk aj ehde kehn te m es nu milan aa gyi,,,mera
ik g kre kamal de kann te ik jor nal thapad mara te puchhan k aj ton3,4
mahine pahilan tu kise hor nal farhi gyi c os din v me
nu
ehi keha c k asin ik duje nu pyar krde haan te aj apni jaan bachaun lyi
ohi diolog es munde lyi bol rahi a...par main oh gal dil vich hi rakh
gya..jagge d halat dekh k oh dasna munasib na samjya... te gal nu thanda
karn d koshish krde hoye m keha......theek aa j tusin ik duje nu aina
hi sacha pyar krde hovoge ta tuhanu ik duje nal marrig karvaun vich koi
problam nahi honi chahidi....us munde ne jhatt dene haan kr
diti...kehnda g main tyar haan kamal nal vyah karvaun nu..m kamal nu
puchheya..ki tu v tyar aa kamal eh nal vyah karvaun nu..ta kamal thoda
sochan lag pyi...taan jagga fir bharhak gya te uth k kamal d gut fadke
kehnda..hun boleya nahi janda tere ton...oh ki puchh reha tere ton..? ta
kamal kehndi menu manjur h par main aje marig nahi karvauni...taan jgaa
gusse vich boleya..kyon aje hor rangralliyan manaun nu g karda..? aje
dil ni bharrya tera meri ijjat diyan leeran krk...? ki eh leeran aje hor
jamane de sahmne hawa vich udauniya chauni a...par kamal ron ton bina
koi utar nahi de rahi c.
Ik nwa nwa jwan hoya...pyar nu puja te kudi nu
rab da roop kehn wala gabroo aksar mere nal facebook te kudiyan de
matter te ate dhiyan de matter te bdi behs kreya karda c...akhe sangdil g
tusin geetan vich kudiyan nu aurat jaat nu mada changa likhde change
nahi lagde..sade guru ta aurat nu jag d jan'ni tak keh gye,kudiyan ta
chidiyan hundiyan, jis bare tusin bura bhla likhde o oh sadi ma,bhain v h
o
sakdi h,vagaira..vagaira..! m kde usnu kuj na keha, kde usnu reply na
keeta....kyi din pahilaan mere kol aaya te kehda 22 g ik kam c tuhade
nal..m keha hanji hukam kro...kehnda bai yar koi manak sahb de>keehde
pain ge marengi sapp ladke mitran nu dhokha deniye....warga geet
chahida...ik apna frnd h oh tape record karva reha us vich lehmbr style
song pauna h ik ....ki mil sakda tuhade kolon....?.hun tusin dso m usnu
ki jwab dyaan.......plz help me........!
"DHIYO tusin v KUJ VICHAR KRO....es war jagge
ne kamal d sharat na mande hoye usnu eh keh k raji kar lyi k j tu parhai
regular rakhna chaundi h ta oh tu marig karvake v oh rakh sakdi h te es
gal nal oh munda v sehmat c te akhir munde de mapeyan nal gal krk ik
month late kamal da vayah rakh dita...doven gharan ch pure josh nal
tyariyan honiya
shuru ho gyiyan....te
akhir oh din v aa gya jagge ne dil kholke vyah te kharch kita barat d
seva vich , te lain den vich koi kasar na chhadi...jagge de sare ske
sabandhi,yar dost bde khush c...munda dekhan vich v sohna c te bank vich
job krda c te kamal ta sukh nal h i pariyan vargi c...har ik d juban
te iko e shabad c k..rab ne jodi bahut sohni bnai aa...te sara karaj
parmatma d kirpa nal hasde khed de nibarh gya....jina dukh ma pio nu
dhee nu ghro torke hunda uston vadh jagge nu kamal wargi dhee de sukhi
sandin ghro doli behn d c....es gal da eshsas menu odo hoya jdo jagge
ne kamal d marig ton ik week baad hi menu dseya k aapan parso ghar vich
shri akhand path parkash karva rahe aan...tu free rahin....main
pusheya..eh kiven achanak hi..ta jagga kehnda asal vich main sukheya c k
kamal da vyag sahi slamat nepre chad jave ta main ghar vich shri akhand
path parkash karvanwanga....pure 7 month bahut vdiya gujre...kamal
bahut khush c apne ghar te os ton jyada usda saura priwar te jagge da
privar khush c........main kamal wlon saura priwar da dil jattan te bda
khush c ..te sochda c kise ne sahi keha k j dhee sachiari,samajdar te
parhi likhi hove ta sat kullan tar jandiyan...menu real ch eh lag reha
c...k siyane sach hi kehnde aa jo jo hona hunda hoke rehnda...insan da
kiita kuj nahi hunda...jo muh kalakh lagni hundi aa oh lag k
rehndi...siyana ban k koi banaunda nahi te kamla ban k koi gwaunda
nahi...eh sab kismat diyan khedan hundian ne......koi admi kamal wal
vekh k eh ni keh sakda c k kamal ne kde eho jahe kadam v chuke hon
ge......par kehnde ne jagg te koi cheej sathai nai...sukh-dukh,
daulat-shahorat, khusi-gam, athru-hasse eh sab dhalde parchhaven hunde
ne kde edhar te kde odhar...eh kde ik de hoke nahi rehnde.
Es kahani da monday nu dukhad ant ho
reha...ant aj v kar sakda c par aj na karn da karan v monday nu hi
dsange...sab nu sat shri akal.
akhir ohi ho gya jis da dar c....ik din
achanak kamal ghron gayab ho jandi h...fon detail ghadvaun ton te hor
inquari karn te kyi dina baad pta chalda h k oh kise munde nal 2 no. ch
canada chali gyi aa te usde canada chali jan d
a
pta lagan te theek 4 din baad jagge ne salfaas diyan goliyan kha lyian
te doctraaan diyan bahut koshishan de bavjood oh es duniyan nu sda lyi
alwida keh gya....te hospital jande hoye ne bas 2 char wari iko hi gal
kiti ...kamal tu changi nahi kiti apne dad nal, tu eh kadam chukan ton
pahilan ik war tan apne peo d pagg bare soch laindi...chandriye j jana
hi c ta ik war das tan jandi..k akhir tere palan poshan vich ja tenu
baap wala pyar den vich ja teri parhai de kharche vich ja teriyan
reejhan puriyan karn vich kithe kammi reh gyi c mere ton....te shayd ehi
swal mera dil v os har ik dhee ton os har ik kudi ton puchhada rahega
jo es tran de kadam chuk diyan han.. ki apne hani da pyar hi sab kuchh
hunda h ?..mapeyan de supne ja mapeyan d izzat koi mayne nahi
rakhdi.....aise kadam chukan ton pahillan oh ohna wal kyon ni nazar
mardiyan go love mariagann karvake v mapeyan de ghar baithiyan ne ja
ghron bhaj k vyah karvaun waliyan de 95% divorce kyon hunde ne
?....jina ne 20 saal dudh makhna nal paliyan hundiya oh aine bure kyon
lagan lag jande ne ? jehde mape apniyan jindgiyan gaihne rakh k bacheyan
de supne pure karde ne ohi mape dushman kyon lagan lag jande ne
?....shayad ehna swalan de jawab ik na ik din dhiyan nu dene hi pain ge
nu...Manneya k dhiyan d ghatdi ginti vich sada smaj doshi h par smaj de
doshi hon de karna vich dhiyan da v bahut vdha rol h....jis pind ja
gwand vich kise kudi ne aisa ghinauna kam kar dita oh pind de lok kyon
na daran ge dhii jamman ton...jdo koi kudi de charitar te ja kudi doshi
hon di gal karda h ta asin sare kiran bedi ja kalpna chawla diyan
misalan den lag jande haan...kalpna chawla ta hzaran lakhaan cho ik ban d
aa te aisiyan khbraan asin roj akhbaaran vich parhde haan te sab kuj
jan de bujde v asin kabootar wang akhaan meech lainde haan...akhan
micheyan schai ne badal jandi....jiven sare smaj da farz ban da dhiyan
nu bachaunda...ohna de kukh ch katal hon d lokan d soch nu badlna k oh v
ik rab de g han ohna nu v eh jagg,eh duniya dekhan ja cha h...ose traan
dhiyan da farz ban da k oh aise kadam na chukan jis nal ohna de mapeya
nu smaj de sahmne nivin pake turna pave....jdo ghar ghar vich mother
taresa te jhansi d rani wargiyan kudiyan banan lag payiaan te jis tra aj
de naujwan nasheyan vich gark de ja rahe han ta oh din door nahi jdo
lok apne ghar dhi jamman diyan sukhaan sukhniyan shuru kar den
ge.........eh meri apni thinking te mera apna nazriya h j kise veer
bhain nu meri likhi gal chubhi hove ja changi na lagi hove ta anjaan te
na-samj...samjke maaf karna...te j koi gal changi lage ta reply jroor
karna.... te ho ske ta waheguru muhre ardaas karna k he waheguru dhiyan
nu smatt te lmi umar baksheen........tuhada chhota veer...Sangdil 47
(smapat)
kudiya nu bht lor a k oh es kahani toh kuj sikhan, padh k bahut dukh lageya te rongte khade ho gae k eda v hunda a ... zindagi ch bahut waari apnia belori khushiya nu pare rakh k apne pariwaar da sochna penda .. koi ena matlabi kida ho skdi a dhee???/
ReplyDeleteSahi gal aaa ji jma
DeleteTrue Bai ji, May girls started thinking abt their parents
ReplyDeleteJis v kudi ne eh kahani read kiti hau veer ji oh jrur apne mapeya bare sochan lai majbur hoi hovegi...
ReplyDeleteBuhat hi vdia gal hai k tusi eh kahani share kiti kai kudiya diya te ohna de mapeya diya jindgiya bach jangiya
Rab rakha veer ji
bai ji
ReplyDeletebeautiful massage
but ajj di vigar rahi generation es gal nu ignore karke apne aisho-aaraam nu jyada importance dindi aa. te koi koi samjhda a
har kuri eh kahani zaroor read kre
salute a bai teri soch yr
ReplyDeletehr ik dhee putt nu apne parents di respect kr ni chai di a ohna ne sadde aisho aram lyi apne sarre dream chd dite bhut struggle krde a din ratt oh apne children lyi love u bai
22 ji main aa puri story padi .....tuhadi gal sahi ki sangt da asr jarur hunda h ..par agr aapa ya koi v apne mapeya di ijjat da dyan rakhda h ta kade v iho jahe galt kadam nhi chukega......
ReplyDeleteStory bhut vdya and eh ajj gal.ho b reha ...maa baap chnga e sochde hunde aa kudiya nu smjn di lod aa...boys frnd bn skde aa but rehna limit ch hi chinda ga ...
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